My name is Henry, I'm 18 and i'm from London. I hate that I have to live here the streets are smelly, pollution is bad. I just don't want to live here, I need a better life.I can't live here anymore it's crowded, Theres no running water, Theres not many job opportunities. I need to change my life and migrate to another country like New Zealand.
Then one day some one finally decided to sail a boat from London to New Zealand for people who weren't going to survive in the smelly stinky streets of London and for who hated the life they were living in London. So I brought a ticket for the boat so I could get out of London. The day comes, The trip to New Zealand begins. On the boat it was disgusting, bearly any food, very crowded and smelly. It took 75 to 120 days to arrive but it was worth it.
The view was awesome and the people were lovely. I love it, I love the change.
Tuesday, 21 May 2019
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I like how you keep it short and sharp, maybe use some more vocabulary in your writing
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